Okay this song is a little bit more better. Here's my review, The beginning isn't that bad although the lead is almost off sync but still nice.
At 1:42, at the drop maybe adding a falling white noise riser thingy will probably help but still good.
And there's pretty much nothing else to add here for this track!
Not sure why this track has a low score but I really think this track has improved. Good Job!
Almost everything of this track is a bit more better. :)
-K